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Painted wings bring eternal hours
Accompanied by withering flowers
Among a garden stands but one
A rose of glass, its peace undone

Longs for a garden free of sin
Injustice gone, all caged within
The bars of hell shutting cold
Hiding corruption once foretold

Please, oh please, I beg of thee
Turn my dreams to reality

Withering none the flowers of glass
Carving the stars, an evermore path
The purest tales written in sand
Lasting hours , times so grand

The rose it blooms, it senses are free
It sways away, refusing to see
Illusions deceiving, hidden in clad
Delusions thriving, driving it mad

Please, oh please, I ask of thee
What has become of my reality?

Golden grief, my wish in a well
All morale has dragged me to hell
Flowers watered, drowning in vice
Festering by the Devil's entice

Echoing crows pick at the thorns
Weak are they, the rose it mourns
For petals descend only to cry
And the garden weeps, all awry

The rose of glass, its drops of dew
They shed, they fall, for the true
The day, the night, it can't discern
The stars, they fall, only to burn

Please, oh please, have mercy on me
To confuse nightmare with reality
Please oh please, have mercy on us
The garden succumbed to the unjust
It's a little song/poem made for an OC, speaking through her point of view and expressing her honest thoughts

This the first poem I've written in forever, I'm so happy TT~TT

The coverart was a manipulation done my good friend :iconsaesura:

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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Beautifully written :3
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LadyPenrose Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :'D
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A7XFan666 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Welcome :3
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Reunica Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
i had to log in to favorite this
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LadyPenrose Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I am honored that you would go through the trouble TTuTT
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28frets Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I think this is absolutely amazing! I can tell that you spent some time trying to figure out the rhyme scheme on this one! I try to do that with my current writing too, I'm glad to see that you were able to piece together something as fluid as this! Keep up the good work I'll be watching (literally). ;)
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LadyPenrose Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, thank you! :D
I looked at some of your work, if you don't mind. You're very talented yourself! :D
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28frets Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome and thank you so much! I should post some of my better work on here but, ugh lack of time and sleep. Hahaha! Stay talented! :D
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Saesura Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Photographer
Love love love love love love love love love
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LadyPenrose Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh yooouuu~ :iconhappyhappyplz:
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